Karbolab

nice

first commet wooo

cool she looks badass, and whats with the storys and will there be lesbian sex in this?

p.s. FIRST COMMENT!!

Nice work, Caliph. GReat stuff.

*tears up* I am so proud… ^__^
Thanks Karbo.

Now I’m gonna have to write up a Full Story script and send it in.
*cracks knuckles* Let the FUN begin!!!

good luck To all. I will try to makee a story line then post it up here.

Great

To Karbo

I have another story line:

There is are 2 girls that are knowledge-seekers, One of them is 22 years-old, Named Robin, Sky-Blue long hair, blue eyes, c-breast-size. The other, Christina, Blonde long- hair, Ruby-red Eyes, Same breast- size as her friend, Robin. Anyway, they are always curious about life’s history, they constantly search in tombs, Caves and etc. But they never once discovered once of lesbian sex. Robin was the one who was mostly curios of sex. They one day, Robin was asking Christina a question about Lesibian sex. Robin said that if she could try it with her. So she agreeds.

Sorry my stroy isn’t in-depht,
Please help me to fill in the blanks in this story line. Mr. Karbo, Caliphand everbody

the fuhrer king must also make a character!

hey karbo do you think i should leave my own stories too?

Hey Mr.$, I had an Idea with my story, but I need your help with one tiny thing. can you give me a name of that nightclub the girls are at? I want one of my characters to be in there for a little before they speed off to do “somthing” (I reveal NO Spoilers for my story. Muhahahaha!!!)

So yeah, since its all ONE BIG CITY, it would seem cool to have each-others characters inter-mingle. Eh?

This is one of many characters. As for the storyline, well take a good guess. As for the face, I’m not to sure how to describe facial features so you can do that part. Also as for the guy’s age, he looks to be in his mid-to-late thirties.

Name: Lance

Gender: Male

Species: Angel (Archangel)

Ethnicity: White

Eye color: Sky Blue

Hair Color: Obsidian

Hair Style: Spiked up

Clothing: Brown trench coat with a white t-shirt with navy blue jeans black shoes.

Weapon: A sword forged and given to him by the Archangel Michael. It has a medieval look to it. The blade has golden glowing angelic runes on the blade and a blue holy aura surrounds the blade. At the center of the hilt is a cross that always pointed to the sky no matter angle you position the sword at. Lance doesn’t use the sword all that often but he will take it out if the situation demands it.

Powers: Unlimited Strength and Speed, Flight (with or without wings), able to wield arcane, holy and elemental energy, a wide variety of psychic abilities such as telekinesis, telepathy and empathy, can breath in any atmosphere and semi-immortality (by semi I mean that he is not truly immortal, meaning to kill him you will need to cut his wings. This means that he can be hurt, it just takes a powerful being to harm him.)

Bio: In the war between heaven and hell Lance was the only angel that did not fight. After the battle of Demensia where Lucifer, the fallen angels that came to his side and his demonic creations were sealed away in the realm that later became known as hell, Lance was about to be stripped of his immortality and his angelic powers until he made a bargain with God (Jehovah). In return for allowing him to keep his immortality and angelic powers, he would kill the demons that were not sealed away with the rest of Lucifer’s army.

So over one hundred thousand years Lance fought against demons and the fallen angels known as Death Knights. But he did not fight alone, after he averted the first world disaster that would have claimed the earth for the forces of hell on his own, other angels began to come join him in the fight and they became known as the Crusaders (which are separated from the Dark Age and Medieval times Knights who were known as Crusaders.

Of course the angels weren’t the only ones fighting against demons and other forces of evil. Human beings formed an organization known as The Order. They destroy the physical and spiritual forces of evil that manifest themselves in the world while at the same time covering up the existence of demons, angels and other supernatural phenomenon.

hey karbo plz can you make a document whit your old pic i wanna have it and see it again plz or make another page only whit images

hey i have some ides for a personality for jasmine if you want to hear them

Well, I am writing right now. (by hand) but hey, shoot man, I’m interested in whatever you got.

I can always make adjustments when I type it out before sending the script to Karbo.

I read alot of the descriptions and I was woundering Is there a guy in this at all or is it just 2 girls starting out?

Don’t forget about my Yiffy sidekick idea

For Mr.$’s story I dont know, but for mine there will be the main “badguys” who are indeed guys. and A character I will introduce when I am done typing out the story for Karbo. I assure you, there will be guys.

Hey I was just woundering cuz I had a guy in my idea. Maybe one that can be introduced into the story later. Honestly I like Female Dominatrix lol But thats just me.

I’ll see what I can do, Maybe your guy can be a villan, or maybe part of the Detective team. it all depends, but I am really up to ideas right now, most probobly wont make it till my next Story. (dont worry they are like tv episodes, short but VERY sweet)
but share and share alike.

K if ya share and share alike I was thinking of a guy that was a run away at the begining of his life. Long white hair, white eyes. Medium build. A little rugged face with cuts all over his body. His play in the role. Well since there detectives they need someone to get there inside info from and he would be it. If you wanna make it more thats fine but he was just the one to give them the locations and what the news was on the street.

Perfect! I could always use an informant for the Story, that would help with some of the Differant Plots and stories.

Really? holy cow I didnt think you would like it but Ok sure you can name him to if you want I was gonna call him frost cuz that would be his nick name on the streets cuz his white hair. But you can name anything you want. Awsome!

Frost is fine by me, and please, no need to treat me like I am famous and all knowing, I am just one helluva lucky guy for being picked. lol
I seriously like just about any Idea I can get from the guys here, because everyone knows what they like. and a cameo here or there is cool too. ^__^

Well you did have a awsome Idea, If ya need help on anything just post up here and I’ll make sure to reply. I’d like to help anyway possible. Then again you accepting a character I thought up was cool enough. not everyday I get to see Ideas come to life.

Now, I would like everyone to know that I AM NOT in charge of what karbo draws from the story, so if your guy/girl is not drawn do not complain, or at least not to me, I am a writer, I SUCK at drawing.
Thanks for understanding. (Buahahahahaha!!!)

I understand. I know no characters are certian to be in the story but just to toss him in there so things connect is still cool enough even if he only gets metioned or is a one page thing in the story or something. I just like fluidity with stories this way they have info normal people wouldnt have like the cops and get further then others.

Indeed, I will be sure to use your character as best I can, Hell, I might even continue my writing if Karbo decideds to stop the pictures coming. lol
Ok, now I am getting ahead of myself, I am just too happy today.

impossible is nosing for karbo

I could see why though. you have so much freedom and open ended options to this. I would be happy if he got used. Also might be to much but to me it would mean more if like the detectives saved the informants life a while ago when he was still learning and remaind loyal to them just so theres no question why he does this no matter what happens to him. Cuz people like him get killed for talking.

Actually Im suggesting to much Im sure you have better Ideas forget I said it LOL have fun with it. *Thumbs up*

I am sure I will make a story one day that will explain all of the characters Motives and back-stories. it will be good fun for me, I dont have much to do this summer.

Me niether so I know where your coming from. But Im glad you like the Runaway as a kid grown up to infromant idea. Hope I helped out and hope I can help out again.

nice man keep it up lesbos rock! any dildo 69?

Bi-twins? Cool. I expect they shall look fantastic.

very nice!
oh, btw nice disclaimer thing at the beginning lol

I am Done! my first story is teh complete!
I only wish the sex scene was better, but I couldent really get into it like I wanted, maybe next time I’ll get someone better to do up that scene.

hey do you think you can draw her on a chopper bike naked with guns?

Hey are you also looking for villans or just heroes

nice

Don’t worry about the Sex scene man, I’m sure your gonna have pleanty more stories where that came from.

HEY Devan, I GOT A CHARACTER FOR YOUR STORY IF YOU WANT HIM. HERE IT IS.

Name: Keith (or Ken to his friends)

Gender: Male

Species: Werewolf (yeah, i know werewolves are suppose to be evil, but he is able to keep control over the wolf, so he knows who he is fighting, so he will not attack anyone who is not evil.)

Ethnicity: White

Eye color: One eye is red and the other is kind of a pale blue.

Hair Color: Kind of a Brownish Red.

Hair Style: Straight

Clothing: The outfit that Blade wears.

Weapons: Ken has a samurai sword that never dulls or breaks. Also, has that Blade boomarange (sp?) and a big ass hunting knife.

Powers: Regeneration (he can heal his wounds, but he needs to be resting/not sleep resting/.) The one eye that is red can see what a persons soul looks like (so he can see like a demon that looks like a human). Super streangth, speed, hearing, and smell. Can see in the dark, think heat vision or something like it.

Bio: Ken grew up like any kid, until his 13th birthday, when his family was attacked by a werewolf. (They were driving home from a family members house were the party was being held atwhen the werewolf ran out of the woods in front of the car. The car went off the road and smashed into a tree. Ken’s father and mother got out to see what the damage was and he and his sister were getting out when it attacked.). His mother, father, and Twin sister were torn to shreds and when he tried to run, the werewolf saw him and pounced on him, biting him on the shoulder. Here is were he thought he was going to die when the werewolf let go of him and ran off, then he blacked out. When he came to, he was in a bed and bandaged up /he still had his pants on/. When he went to the door, he was greated by an old man. He told Ken to follow him to his study. There he told Ken his name. His name was Kane and that he was a werewolf. When Ken heard that Kane was a werewolf, he flipped stating that he was the one who attacked him and his family. Kane said it was not him, but a Dark Wolf, then he told Ken about a war between Dark and Light wolves, were the good werewolves fought to protect humans from the bad werewolves and their masters. Once Kane tells Ken that, he gives him a choice: train under him and fight the Dark wolves and avenge his family or be killed right now. Ken chooses option 1, so he begins his training. Not sure when you have your character Devan, but now at the age of 22, Ken is a master hunter and is ready to destroy the master of one pack of Dark wolves, only to be surprised to see its an angel.

Hope you like it.

is that suppose to be toshi

Neat looks good

probable , im not gonne write a story till i draw my own char> legs are done already,
got a little problem with upper body proportions…
( first try legs were huge in comparisonn:P )

So Are we gonna just add our ideas to this story line or are we going to be working on other story lines that cross with this one? Aslo are we gonna put color into the pictures or would it be better to leave it black and white?

Well, it depends on who the angel is, is it a Crusader. Because if so it wouldn’t make sense since all of the Crusaders are good. But if it’s a Death (a fallen angel on the side of Lucifer) then yeah i guess i could add him.

FYI: Fallen angels are always referred as Death Knights. The name came to me from Warcraft III game but these ones are different as you can see.

Name: Antonio

Gender: Male

Species: Angel (Archangel)

Ethnicity: Spanish

Eye Color: The sclera would be black while the pupil will be yellow and in place of the iris is a red slit.

Hair Color: Black

Hair Style: Slicked Back

Clothing: A black three piece suit with the tie missing and the collar somewhat wrinkled under a long black coat. He has rugged good looks and speaks in a slight Spanish accent. He looks to be in his mid thirties and is always seen smoking a cigarette. Also his black angelic wings are always protruding out of his back.

Weapon: He has no weapon other than those he summons himself.

Powers: Unlimited Strength and Speed, Flight, able to wield arcane, holy and elemental energy, a wide variety of psychic abilities such as telekinesis, telepathy and empathy, can breath in any atmosphere and semi-immortality.

Bio: Before the war between heaven and hell, Antonio was once Lance’s best friend as they had fought side-by-side before the war against incredible evils that threatened the universe before Lucifer turned.

When the Unholy War came Antonio was the first to go to Lucifer’s side and was the first angel to fall to Lucifer’s promises of greater power.

After the battle of Demensia the fallen angels were named Death Knights and as Antonio being the strongest among was given the title of Lord of the Death Knights and was made into one of the three Lords of Hell under the High Lord Lucifer who truly ruled hell and its entire splendor.

Antonio and other angels have found a way to enter and exit hell through various rituals but it only allows them to trade their place with that a human or any other species in the universe.

Antonio has since his release from hell has been carrying out Lucifer’s order to try and release him. As Antonio being the leader of the Death Knights he is Lance’s arch nemesis since Lance is the leader of the Crusaders and Antonio is leader of the Death Knights.

Because of this the two have clashed with each other on more than one occasion and it would seem that the fallen angel is beyond redemption.

Also, i forgot to mention both of these guy’s personality.

Lance is always serious and observant and always takes a situation seriously.

Antonio is cold and calculating the last detail. He also hates the Crusaders with a passion, especaily their leader Lance.

Also, not all demon are evil as some are good, other evil and then some are neutral who sell information to both sides.

So is that gonna be in Jasmine’s story line too?

Wow talk some serious storys that would be a DC comic…

I keep noticing all the characters have nothing but the best powers. There are WAY too many GREAT characters. We would need a few more normal and not so great characters in there.

And FYI: A story is always more fun when you watch a character learn and grow. For examples: Naruto, Ranma 1/2, Inu Yahsa, Star Ocean Ex_
Might be better if you know where the character is going, and start them like halfway there. Gives you more room to grow in the story and gives you more to write about. Like how they learn how to use telekenetics.
Doesn’t really count for Angels though, since they were pretty much created in final form.

Do think that I am that good of a writer or teacher, I just read a lot of Fanfics.

Lol, sory typo:
Do NOT, i repeat NOOOTTTTTTT think I am that good. I read a lot

We now bring you back to your regular broadcast. Thank you

Good to know someone else reads alot.
and as for the whole superhero thing, I know what you mean, thats why I made Jasmine as normal as I possably could.

Hi, sorry i am late, But i will tell the name of the city, it shalle dbe called Campton

Is Jasmine gonna get into the supernatural as the story progresses?

That sounds alot like Capcom no offense

none taken, but i barly got here. So listen up, I can’t be herre constanly.(due for my classes) but it is only for a couple of days. in the mean time i will do the best i can. Alright?

P.S Name for the city sholud be San Pariadice?

Thats cool man Im just trying to help find names, If you wanna call it that its cool.

Coolio. It’s just i am trying to help.

I will try hard to set up some supernatural stuff later on in the series, but for now I want to stick with the basics and get my “Sealegs” again. sort-to-speak.

But, I still need a good place to post up my beggining, unless karbo decides to do it with his next pictures. *shrug*

yeah same here lol though I do feel a little lost right now, Like Is this gonna be what we do the whole time. Are these the girls gonna run into the most extream things and were gonna wrap the city around him or is there gonna be a bunch of stories that work into everyone elses story. Also are we gonna be keeping the comics black and white or color it up.

Beats me, but I do belive it will Be differant stories for differant Writers, and it will probobly never lead up to an “ultimate” goal, unless all the writers do so choose to Work together on one tale through the eyes of all, or as a team.

(I am reminded of one episode of Teen Titans, were dozens of new superheros and bad guys fight, somthing like that I suppose)

LOL I know the episode your talking about it was called Calling all Titans. And Id be happy to work together with everyone on stories, and honestly comics have no ultimate goal. Maybe a Rival that makes the story interesting but not really a goal.

is not the goal of all heros to beat the bad guy to protect their city

i have an idea of a character ok she is some kind of alien project that has the shape of a human female. she doesent know any better so she is troun in this world to gather information on earth people. she has white hair she is tan . when and if she gets mad or really exyted her body glows with tatoos like an alien design or something thats all i got for her oh yea her name is MISTIC

to not be needed

Sure I can work with that.

i have an idea of a character ok she is some kind of alien project that has the shape of a human female. she doesent know any better so she is troun in this world to gather information on earth people. she has white hair she is tan . when and if she gets mad or really exyted her body glows with tatoos like an alien design or something thats all i got for her oh yea her name is MISTIC

Just a quick suggestion, i dont know about the rest of you but i love furry porn and mabye karbo if you get enough positive replys can you plz make some furry.

Devan YOU ARE RIGHT ABOUT THE ANGEL BEGIN A DEATH KNIGHT. (NICE, SOMEONE ELSE ON THIS SITE KNOWS ABOUT WARCRAFT.) I ALSO KNOW THAT SOME DEMONS ARE GOOD, BUT I DID NOT KNOW ABOUT NETRUAL ONES.

FORGOT TO ADD TWO THINGS TO MY GUY.

personality: Ken has two kinds, one is serious when he is on the hunt and when he fights, almost like a madman. His second one when he is not fighting is kind of laid back, fall asleep under a tree personality.

And the second thing, is that he is followed by his sister’s ghost. She is like a spirit guide or something. For those of you who seen them, think of the ghosts from the American werewolf movies think of those spirits, but she does not look like she was torn to shreds, but looks like this:

http://www.blizzard.com/inblizz/fanart/ScreenShot.aspx?ImageIndex=398&Set=0 but her outfit is not torn.

Getting back an Speaking of the Goal of what a hero does, Yeah it does mean to protect the city from the Villan but the Villan never dies he lives to cause problems another day till that persons caught then another villan takes his place. So technically there isnt a real end goal for the hero. So maybe we should start thinking about bad girls to go against our good ones?

after lookin @ devan’s first comment….Y R ALL THA PPL IN HENTAI WHITE!!!!…. and dont say white ppl look better….or…they’re easier 2 c cuz thats a load of BULLSHIT

Im telling Wally West you the goal for a hero is not to be need that why they became heros in the first place because they were needed. take batman for example the reson he became a hero was so that no one else would have to lose their parents the way he did

hey Devan,
good characters, but whats angels n crusaders have to do with PORN?????
seriously… T_T just cant see an angel bangin anyone…

one word you guy’s mind control sex.

To Devan i got a plot you can use for your charecter Lance maybe his seman could be like holy water and he gets on with the woman to expel the demons with in

What’s up Today is my last class, after that i will be here conastly
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P.S NO SCHOOL CAN HOLD ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

angels use mind control and have orgies

anbody here?

hello their

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DIAF $

what did i do?

what ever it is, it wasn’t my flaut

stop saying hello or anyone there

Sorry, it’s just that i don’t see lot of people here anymore, compare to last week.

How about this as a story for this lovely young biker?

Jasmine is a biker and roamer at heart but it also keeps her a float. She does anything for money even risk her neck. Using money from the races she competes in she keeps herself on livings end in hotels. She isn’t able to get a cheaper apartment or rental because of her poor rep and credit and she can’t get a good rep without a home.
One day a man offers her a huge amount of money for her services and being on the red line decides to take the money and sleep with him. After that night of hot and loud sex, he offers her the job to be full time. Forking up the money and a place to stay, she takes his offer and stays on as his paid squeeze. She goes exploring and what does she find? Nothing but a basement filled with stange sex toys. What has she gotten herself into now?

OH I GOT AN IDEA FOR THE CHOPPER. MACHINE GUNS!!!!!

for the chopper, machine guns

Giants Black Meat White Treat

maybe with yahoo messenger