Karbolab

woo first comment
nice work

second comment, gj on the bouncers, miss the old pics, but I guess new ones will do!

third coment! i still think drawing guys is very very very creepy….

To pisco45
i agree

how iz it creepy?~ umm they are weargin clothez!!!!!

Hey Karbo I was kinda thinkin of a way for the to comic start to start, it can begin with violet waiting for her half brother, whom she just found out existed his name is Moses a.k.a Grimme(karbo you can find a description for this character in the violet post) while she’s waiting she sees someone walking into back ally, out of curiousity she follows and ends up witnessing a murder, before she could run or do anything the murderer had started going after her causing to run like hell and running into Grimme

we also need a detective(guy or girl) that some how meets all of our characters

EX: pulls Jasmine over for speeding
takes twins home after a out of control party
saves violet from murderer(as said by roxus2)

^^^Helps save violet

continued: Then he asks if her name is Angie and violet replies saying yes while panting heavily and then she asks who he is , its me your half brother Moses , then violet ends up fainting from exitement,afterwards grimme realizes that violet was being followed by someone seeing this he quickly carries her to a police department.

well karbo what do you think of my opening , feel free to mention any ideas u have for it to make it better cause after writing it I see I made some mistakes and if you want to know what Grimme(Moses) looks like you can check back in the violet post.

na fuck police yo he beat up the murderer till he stoped moving thats when magnos comes in an beats violets bro cuz he though that violet got hit along with the murderer. now that violet woke up on magnos arms she almost fainted but magnos slaped her in the face (lol) cuz he wanted to what happened

i prefer Roxus2 story better

OK SO VIOLET WOKE UP WIRH THAT SLAP AND TOLD HIM THAT MOSES IS HER HALF BROTHER SHE ALSO TOLD HIM THAT THE OTHER GUY ON THE FLOOR IS A MURDERER RIT WHEN SHE WAS ABOUT TO TELL MAGNOS HOW MUCH SHE LOVES HIM THE POLICE SIRENS STARTED TO MAKE APPEAR SO MAGNOS JUNPED IN HIS VIPER CAR AND DISAPEARD IN HIS OWN SMOKE ( HE WAS GOING FAST NO POWERS).

but how about this: violet just got out of school and was told to meet her bro. after school. She goes to the correct location but after a while no one showed up so she dicided to leave and then when she was on a bus 3 guys that entered knocked out the driver and decided to steal the bus but then noticed violet on the side of the bus, the leader of the 3 told one of them to take the bus far from the road. Violet stayed on the side scared of whatm was happening, then the bus stops and the 3 men were coming to get her. She screamed very loudly and wke up a guy that was sitting 3 banks after her. When he sees whats happening he quiqckly goes to her rescue. The 3 men then go after him and put out guns but from the adrenaline rush he had he then moves quiqkly and takes one of the mens gun and then the other 2 started to shoot but then he putted the guy that he took the weapon as a shield and acuratly shooted the other 2 in the hands and legs so they couldnt move. Then he goes to see how Violet is and she tells him that she is fne thanks to him and then he takes the bus and drives it away into the city and they get down ( no further notice shall be made of the 3 men ). She then asks his name and he tells his name and she does the same, then she asked him if he would like to go with her home to make her company after all that had happend and he says: YES…Then they leave for her apartment and the rest is to be decided.

It could be:
1) She goes to her apartment and after some talk and other stuff they do it…
2) Once at the aparment then he tells her that he is looking for his sister and then an emotional moment because they found each other and were safe…
3) He tells her that he is a new transfer student and will be atending to the same school and all that…( and they do it)…..(hehehe)…..

They guy’s name is Kurono ( psico45)

age: to be determined by violet’s age maybe a few years older

hair: short and black mostly spiked haired style for the gel…

weight: 165.6 lb

eyes: violet ( like her name)

blood tipe: AB

clothes: normally or in this case a black shirt and black pants (casual style) and mostly wears a black coat

aspirations: to become a doctor (therefor he is very good with the scapel but not in the doctors way)

weapons:108 scalpels hidden inside his body

personalatie: he is very kind and suttle but when in a fight he is very ruthless and cares for nothing (he has various scars from all the fights he has been in)

Also i would like to make notice that this is the largest comentarie i have ever leaved here on karbo lab….

also to Mr.$ thx for agreeing someone had to notice…

so does anyone like my story? anyone? magnos? roxus2? deimos? Mr. $? Lo rider007? Toshi? HP? KARBO? hey karbo do you like my story? because i have more ideas, ideas so smart my head would explode if i even began to think what they were…..

no promb.
of couse i like your story, you didn’t say if we agree on it.

i think your story is pretty good psico45

I got a good idea for either the murderer or an undercover cop:

Name: Rico
size and build: medium
ethnicity: Spannish
Clothing style: Trenchcoat (black), white t-shirt, jeans (black, tight on the crotch and hips and loose on the legs) and army boots (black aswell)
Tattoos: Dual Black dragons, one on each arm with the heads on the back of his hands and the tails just under the tip of his shoulders. (only the head is visible through the sleevesof the coat)
Fighting style: Capoeira (low stance and moves like a dancer)
Weapon: Double Machette (one holstered on his back like a ninja’s sword, the other under his black trench coat)

For the hairstyle, I figure since he is more of a fighter, let it be short, but then counterbalance for a bad-boy look with bad ass shades, that get darker in the light and lighter in the dark

Pisco, i like your story for sure. It would be cool if she meets her brother that way. (but it would be funny if she finds that out after they bang each other’s brains out) Yes, there is a twisted brain in here lol

Also, i like the details of your character.

Karbo, do you think that maybe you can put little details in the drawing for the clothing, like a texture to tell each one apart, didn’t look too much to see if you do that or not.

OK psico45 when I made this there were no plans for these two to do it,besides the character I made for this comic was sopposed to be her half brother and what brother would have sex with there sister. and psico that character you made sounds suspiciousally like Akabane Kuruno from The GetBackers, I mean you even got his personalility and weapons and if karbo posts this guy on his site he could end up getting sued again but it’s really Karbo’s choice but I stand by my word.and I hope you liked my idea karbo

dude what happened to great old drawings? Sheesh I leave home for a few days and look what happens!

Nice man, he seems like a Carlos, Jack seemed more caucasian.

well duh it sounds like akabane but thats why i changed the name ( altho only for a letter) and tell me that his atack like the bloddy huricane or sword isnt cool? anyways its not kurodo but kurono ( go figure that one out too) he is very funny too so thats why i figured a way around the disclaimer and found a loop hole but thx to you i had to expose it! way to go roxus…. look i f the character aint the same no matter how little the detail changed it can not be used against karbo because its not the character besides hes name is kurodo and now i changed it to kurono….see? anyways i puted more than 1 choice and one not including sex….I still cant belive you damaged my plan and my loop hole….ur a real Idiot man…( no ofence)

None taken man its just that my mother is planning on getting rid of the computer in our house and Im trying to get PSP so I can keep coming here and if I cant I just want to leave my mark on this site just in case.

Hello?

Where the hell is everbody? i can’t help you if no one is here.

Hi Roxeus.

To Roxeus2

Hey, that’s life..
I been through worse. like this 1 time, my parents tried to prevent me through going to “unathourized sites”. But i alawys manged to cracked through pretty much everthing.

how old i mr $

^Is mr $

hey psico how about we compromise and we use your opening story(with no sex between the brothers and sister) and we’ll put in both our characters in there and they’ll both be her half brothers and there not twins .and again Karbo u can find a description for my character in the violet posting.

Wow I cant help but notice how many posters are trying to put themselfs in the Rp. LOL just saying

So what do u think psico and you to karbo I hope you like the idea.

it’s good.

I freakin lost, If someone could help me out with this. Now Violets got 2 half brothers?

OK OK is it just me or is this story/comic just going to be like an adult movie but comitizied…

You know what how about Violet doesnt go to school, Since she’s 19 and people useually graduate at 18 to 19. College maybe but not high school. Now she’s a person that works at the night club in the first story (and no she’s not a stripper. If I could quote Karbo he said stories and not just sex) Half brothers sounds like a throw on of characters. If you want more people we need more ideas and better reasons then Half brothers. Now im just assuming that Since Magnos liked my Idea that she’s a girl that everyone ones and eveyone keeps missing the chance to get her she isnt a girl that knows her way around. We have a girl like that and she’s the tomboy in the Bi Twins post. Making her living she has a good small apartment upstairs, Since the Night club buisness isnt the nicest theres always a manager trying to push her into the idea of going onto the stage and shaking her body for money. Maybe that could come later. Anyway Since the Night clubs a bad place Jasmine could always go back there cuz Crooks hang there cuz Crooks hang out in slums like that. And The Twins go there a cuz The Tomboy loves it and forces her the other to go. Stories aside thats how all the characters could really connect to eachother. If you want stories you gotta start working together and really working out these Ideas and what characters should really be in this and not just any character.

Also Im not trying to be harsh or rude Im just trying to get stories straight so that I can help and Honestly Half brothers sound to easy and simple for putting a character into a story.

okay how about this my guy name is andy right he’s got long dark blue hair with three bangs covering his right eye that he keep’s tied up samuraish and red pupils eyes 6′7 and wears a size 15 pair of black canvas converse black pants and a black leather coat ( no shirt ) and carries around a demonically blessed claymore (sword) that has electricity pulsing from it , a blue guitar with a crow on it also demonically blessed. and has cut marks and stuff all over his body. also he has many electric powers and is an underground kick boxer where he goes by the name seiryu. right and when people ask who he is he says: I AM THE 3RD CHILD OF THE KING OF THE LION DEMONS AND BY FAR THE STRONGEST or when people ask how did you learn to fight so well he says: BECAUSE I AM THE AVATAR OF THE MIGHTY THUNDER DEMON GOD RAIDEN AND HE PASSED DOWN HIS ALMIGHTY POWERS TO ME AND GAVE ME PUNK FUNK GUITAR LESSONS. OH AND HE HAS AN ADDICTIVE PERSONALITY AND IS A LECHER. hows that leav comments please!

oh and he’s 26 and he’s not lying about anything he said.

good i agree

To Magnos- So if your gonna be a bad guys does that mean your a really bad bad guy or just a bad boy and thats why violet likes ya. Cuz if thats true then you would be a great add to the story as another main character.

Ok Wally heres how my character can fit into the story Moses(Grimme) could be jasmines partner who had been assigned to be the bodygaurd of violet while she is in danger with the mafia since she witnessed the murder and now have to live together which ends up with them having frequent arguements(this could be a running gag) yet still he protects her.And through them living together they end up finding out they’re actually related,that is how the whole half brother thing would fit into all this.hows that man

ok wally my character could fit into like this, Moses(Grimme) be jasmines partner(this way he would have a connection to some besides violet)who had been assigned to gaurd violet since she witnessed the murder causing them to have to live together because of this they have frequent arguments(could be a running gag)but he still protects her.through them living together they end up finding out theyre related which explains the whole half brother thing.so what do you wally west.

sorry about that up there I got confused

That actually might work if Jasmine accepts a partner. If not then we could fit him into the place another way. Like If you really want to be Violets Room mate then you could be like a hired help by her father with orders to be her body guard. Or if she doesnt have a father in this you could be extra help from the Strip Club thats there to protect her cuz she’s a good friend and all the people at the club are worried so you make sure no one goes into her apartment. You could be a normal guy to with a Girl friend and a place of your own but right now she’s in danger and until Jasmine makes room in her place you could watch over her, then You can go into the whole being Jasmines either partner or apprentice since she’s gonna be a skilled detective in the comic. What ya think?

YES MAGNOS IS THE MAIN BAD GUY IN ALL THIS

AND I THOUGHT I WAS A BAD GUY.

To JAYMZ

Let’s just say you would’t believe even i told you. besides that’s no the point.

k

now to the point Does anyone like my cop idea?

Wally’s idea mmight work

what abouut mine?

plus i honstly think my guy is better and whould beat up all your people then grab violet and the twins by the hair and drag them to his room with a bootle of captain morgan.

hey everione renmber that magnos is a drug dealer

Alright Homles.

then after he was done with them he’d use his magical guitar to play the national athem. and then he’d go back to his room and do’it all over again then the phone rings and panties are laying everywhere and then he say’s “a assination misson… how much is it paying…I’ll be there in a minute… whatever it takes. then he grabs his guitar and his sword and puts on his jacket and walks out the door. also his favorite movies are the highlander, the warriors, and heavenly hyapathia. and every once in a while he’ll pick up the phone and say “Im not coming back fuck the throne.”

I would say that maybe The Roxus’ Character could be a part time Partner, But MY character (who happens to also be Named Doug) is her true partner, along with the random people who work under her.

And as soon as the Chat/Board Comes up, I will post the previous story so you all know what I am talking about.

HOMLES

so jasmine is a cop?(detective?)

karbo, were is all of your other stuff
witch
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kp?

Ok, thats fine, heck he can be a part time character or extra help that can be called on when needed, Im not gonna promise anything cuz I’m gonna wait for your guys approval. And if Magnos is the Main Bad guy in this comic strip how does Violet know him. Through working at the strip club? Seeing him around but not knowing he was a dealer, or does she know him cuz he’s always working some way to get her around him. Like pulling her into his area so she cant help but notice him being a big powerfull rich guy.

Also to Caliph- Your character, Doug. True partner is a good idea to start out with, And she does have many people in her loop to get things done, But is Doug the True partner that knows the flow of the streets like she does or is he a Rookie at it learning as he goes. Cuz if hes not the Rookie then Roxus’ character can be. Or if you wanted to be the Rookie Roxus could be the man with the muscle behind him. He could have the bouncers of the strip club back him up and there following Jasmine cuz she’s gonna find out who killed the person in the night club, Since it would probably ruin buisness and hurt alot of people that they care about. I mean from what I’ve seen we could make the Night Club a place where everyone watches everyones back and was the wrong place to kill someone. So Roxus could be the Muscle for jamsine to call for in a tight squeeze.

Might wanna change his name though two dougs might get a little confusing.

start a chat room here

Well, I hadent Expected Karbo to make a bouncer with the same name.
As for the Two, I say they should be neutral, Kinda like One has the skills to pick off an unwary badguy, while the other has the skills to find him through “connections” and stuff. not new guys, but not truly veterans either.

I dont really much mind anyways, as long as I dont have to write it.

Its kinda intresting. Kinda like both of them together have jasmines skills and sources. Which would be the infromant and others that you added beside mine. The Reason I say its intresting is cuz it could work in the story like a part where jasmine gets introuble and they both use there skills to find her. The problem with it that I really saw though was that the true partner should have the bigger part and the second should have a side story of his own but not be the main focuse. Still if you want to have both in the story then thats cool. Me personally I still think he should be someone that helps jasmine, and let your character be jasmines partner. I like the partner Idea honestly. Maybe later down the road Roxus could get into the parts and be more then muscle. But every characters gotta start somewhere, and being bodyguards/ bounces isnt a bad start. Besides if hes a strip club bouncer he has more reason to stay in the story and has a bigger play in Violets story. We can go from there, honestly i just wanna see this comic become kick ass since everyone wants to see it start up. Why im tryin to focuse the characters and story so that we all know the parts and agree to them while still having flexability to change it further down the road.

damn it what about me? will you at least insult my ideas.

and then not only that but andy’s best friend jin is the leader of a street gang called the warlords.

OK so wally west your saying my character can be either a bodygaurd or a bouncer. I’d rather he be violet’s bodygaurd cause if he’s her bodygaurd he’ll have to be around her most of the time and this way he will still have a big part in violets story.as for his role in jasmines story he can be her part time partner ,weapons expert,and forensic scientist because if hes the muscle people are going to expect him to be kinda stupid but if he also works in forensics hes gonna have to be a smart guy.

Also he’ll be needed to I.d who the murderer was.also if there was a part when Jasmine got in trouble he could be the guy who would grab the purp by the collar and slams him into the wall ,holds a gun to his head and intarogates him .so what do you think.

Well actually he was gonna be both the Bouncer and the Bodyguard. The guy was gonna look over Violet cuz he knows her an sees her around all the time. And just cuz your muscle doesnt mean your stupid, the proof of that is easily shown in Karbos first bouncer he loves to read and yadda yadda yadda. The point to make him have no other skills but muscle was to let him develop them as the comic went on. And why would he need to ID the murderer, its not gonna happen infront of him. He probably would never see the murder. And as for Jasmine you should get calls from her on when she needs help She has a true partner already. Being a bounder and a body gaurd would also make your story more flexable in peoples stories as well. You dont just have to be cricleing jasmine. you could be on the job and also run into The Bi twins now and then, get hired by other people for protection down the line, like I said I want him to be flexable. And Its a bad part of town, your guy might not be a wepons expert but he can certianly be someone that knows his way around all kinds a guns and knows about them cuz he studys them. As for forensices, Seems to slow for your guys style I say we work him more as an intimidation and interigation guy. Now the question is can your guy kill someone…. not someone that deserves it. But a low person that has information and if he doesnt give it up would your guy kill someone for something small as like a name. Could he handle it or would he find another way Cuz if hes a killer it doent make him to much better then anyone else. and that Ends justify the means crap dont mean anything here.

Wally what I meant by ID is say the murderer used a knife or gun and fingerprints were left on it all he would have to do is crossreference them with other fingerprints.And no my character isn’t a mindless killer if he needs to get information from someone he’II do something like slam there head against a dumpster or something until the guy gave him the info he wanted.

Well technically mindless wouldnt be a killer, Heartless would be a killer. And I think Jasmine would have the fingerprints before your guy since she’s the detective so i dont know how your guy would get them. Like I said he can get into that later, we have main characters right now and dont really need another guy after the murderer.

Actually the detective would send the evidence to a crimelab where it is analyzed by a forensic scientist.

and also if you work in forensics you dont realy go out into the field to persue a murderer unless there under certain orders.

True but Jasmine does have connections and also wouldnt you want this guy to be in the story instead of in a room analysing a finger print. I say let someone else be the forensic and let your character have the action and the jobs. But if you want him in the room analyising a foot print it doesnt really go with a street smart, gun knowing, bouncer that also doubles as a body guard. I mean im not saying he should be dumb as rocks but the life stlye hes been living really would just make it to convinent for him to be both an investigator and a person that can forensic a crime scene. It would put him always at the head of the story and hes not a main character, its just to much for a starting character thats not a main. And we already have mains to focuse on more.

Wally has a good poin about the connections.

Well when you put it that way I guess the forensic thing was a little much so how bout we do your idea.and violet and my character will still be related right.

Thats another strech if you ask me. You would have to ask Magnos, The best idea would for him and all the other bouncers and strippers look at her like a little sister. Always wanting to protect her and watch over her, It would also expain why she has a place over the strip club. But for them to be actually related seems like an easy way to keep your character in the story with violet. Did you wanna stay with violet cuz really your character could be in other stories. I dont know why you would wanna limit yourself to one.

Why didn’i i thought that?
Hell, let’s all combine our characters and put them on 1 storyline……together.

Well everyone likes the Idea of all the characters crossing one anothers paths while going through there story but i dont know youd have to ask Karbo if he wants one comic

OK wally how bout instead of being her half brother he can just be a good friend of hers and we just leave it at that huh.

Well like I said they could be as close as family with out being family, Like the Night Club is watching over her so yeah thats fine. If you wanna be in Violets story only thats cool.

Dude I never said tha I wanted my character to only be in Violets story , he can be in jasmines story too.

and besides this will show a connection between the 2 stories if Karbo decides to put the stories together.

yes but killers are mindless not heartlesss you fool in our great millitary force who do you think does all the killing the mindless peons or the cold lonely smart people in a room typeing away at there computer.

PS they’re heartless because they’re virgins

notice me notice me notice me notice by the way did any one see shin chan wasnt the part with the 3 cat girls awesome like the 1st one was tiger girl the second one was green leopard and the third one was red pussy and they bleeped out the pussy part of her name the red pussy told tiger girl (who is actually a middle aged kindergarten teacher) you look like a senior citizen stripper. then tiger girl said hey you should’nt show off your cups if there’s no milkshake in em. then before that tiger girl was a bad guy because she tried to sexually assult men who were just walking around. oh and umm NOTICE MEE!

cmon i know you can see me!

hey karbo i know your scared to death by primus but could you at least tone down the color on the chick giving head so she looks less like a fake black person and more like irma.

DIAF fuhrer king redlion

WTF iz DIAF?!?!?!?!?!?!?

uh karbo, in the catagories, your other work isnt there, what happened and were is it?

Die In A Fire.

come on lordi, it’s like WTF

karbo love the new characters. any plans 2 bring all the others like teen titans and kim possible and so on?

yes but it’s not obvious

This site was once dedicated to toon porn and very well drawn of that to, but now its becoming literally a adult porno you can buy at a store but in comic form.. Thanks to some A-Hole that tried to sue karbo this site has gone way from what i thought was good now its just…

uhh…not rly…cuz EVRYBODY knows ‘WTF’…..they’ve evn made a t-shirt 4 that…..on tha other hand….i dont think EVRYbody’s heard of ‘DIAF’ and also… y does it haf 2 b a fire?…..y cant u jus say….DIE

oh man! psico is back bitches! the school began and since i have to stay there on the nights too i cant use my pc…anyways i like youre idea Roxus2 but sorry i did not reply sooner….ill be gone in 2 ays for another week…

Damn… lets hope it passes by.

Nice pics karbo..but knowing about the backround of the guys makes it wierd and creepy..cuz they’re guys..still ok once you get past that though

WOOT, PSICO MONKEY’S BACK

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karbo fan Says:

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not bad, but you forgot 1 thing……. NONE OF US WANT TO PAY TO LOOK AT THE PICTURES.

shit!

YOU DID NOT THROW THAT INTO THE MIX DID YOU.

Yep he did.

no he didn’t

can ne one make a good pic of katara from the avatar: teh last airbender, naked?

Hi people
I do not know what to give for Christmas of the to friends, advise something ….

Hello. Prompt how to get acquainted with the girl it to me to like. But does not know about it
I have read through one history
Each of you has your personal story; it is your history. Keeping a diary or writing your feelings in a special notebook is a wonderful way to learn how to think and write about who you are — to develop your own identity and voice.

People of all ages are able to do this. Your own history is special because of your circumstances: your cultural, racial, religious or ethnic background. Your story is also part of human history, a part of the story of the dignity and worth of all human beings. By putting opinions and thoughts into words, you, too, can give voice to your inner self and strivings.

A long entry by Anne Frank on April 5, 1944, written after more than a year and a half of hiding from the Nazis, describes the range of emotions 14-year-old Anne is experiencing:

“. . . but the moment I was alone I knew I was going to cry my eyes out. I slid to the floor in my nightgown and began by saying my prayers, very fervently. Then I drew my knees to my chest, lay my head on my arms and cried, all huddled up on the bare floor. A loud sob brought me back down to earth, and I choked back my tears, since I didn’t want anyone next door to hear me . . .

“And now it’s really over. I finally realized that I must do my school work to keep from being ignorant, to get on in life, to become a journalist, because that’s what I want! I know I can write. A few of my stories are good, my descriptions of the Secret Annex are humorous, much of my diary is vivid and alive, but . . . it remains to be seen whether I really have talent . . .

“When I write I can shake off all my cares. My sorrow disappears, my spirits are revived! But, and that’s a big question, will I ever be able to write something great, will I ever become a journalist or a writer? I hope so, oh, I hope so very much, because writing allows me to record everything, all my thoughts, ideals and fantasies.

“I haven’t worked on Cady’s Life for ages. In my mind I’ve worked out exactly what happens next, but the story doesn’t seem to be coming along very well. I might never finish it, and it’ll wind up in the wastepaper basket or the stove. That’s a horrible thought, but then I say to myself, “At the age of 14 and with so little experience, you can’t write about philosophy.’ So onward and upward, with renewed spirits. It’ll all work out, because I’m determined to write! Yours, Anne M. Frank

For those of you interested in reading some of Anne Frank’s first stories and essays, including a version of Cady’s Life, see Tales From the Secret Annex (Doubleday, 1996). Next: Reviewing and revising your writing

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