Raven vs. Jinx (B&W)
Hello folks! As you asked me about Raven vs. Jinx comic B&W source, I m gonna post it all here! But not at once, ok? Here are 5, 6, 7 and 8 pages 
As you can notice Jinx casts paralysis spell on Raven…. so she has to obey Jinx…
BTW… Would you like to help with dialogs there? My English is not very well for it… But yours is wonderful So could you help me a bit? The plot is simple… I starts when Challenge Master teleports girls to the Super heroines Worldwide Competition… And then it starts… The result of drawing was Raven vs. Jinx
Comments (34 comments)
Roxus2 / February 21st, 2007, 11:56 am / #
very nice Karbo. Heres my dialogue for the master of games. “Greetings heroines and welcome to the Tournement Of Heroines”. And in a thought bubble he could be thinking “Damn theyve got some hot asses”. And in the scene with Jinx VS Raven he could say “First Round: Jinx VS Raven , Begin”.
Karbo / February 21st, 2007, 12:09 pm / #
Great… And one more thing… Do you like sounds text in comics - like: splurt, glshhhh etc
Roxus2 / February 21st, 2007, 1:12 pm / #
I think thats something that should be discussed with everyone on the site. But personally I would’nt mind but not to many of them.
Lord_Zarfax / February 21st, 2007, 2:24 pm / #
very nice Karbo. keep it comeing :p
Titans Fucker / February 21st, 2007, 3:54 pm / #
Karbo- EXCELLENT!
and also, I wouldn’t mind sound dialogue, as long as they are few and far apart
H13 / February 21st, 2007, 4:23 pm / #
Sounds are fine as long as they don’t impose on the beautiful artwork. Also, there doesn’t look like a lot of chances for dialogue. The art speaks for itself, I believe.
king of pron / February 21st, 2007, 8:29 pm / #
dude u rule
Gungho-gun / February 21st, 2007, 8:39 pm / #
you have to be careful with speech bubbles and sounds, they are good at times, but at others you should leave them out, or push them far to the side. remember, a picture is worth 1000 words
ARNie! / February 21st, 2007, 8:39 pm / #
I wonder who ends up being the winner…besides us
Slyce / February 21st, 2007, 9:05 pm / #
Awesome and i would have to agree with H13. Some sound would be awesome too. Hail Karbo
B.A.N. / February 21st, 2007, 9:49 pm / #
kool….. im not rly good w/ makin up a story and all… so….. ya…. and also….where r u from since u say ur english iznt good?
Herald / February 21st, 2007, 10:38 pm / #
Well personally sound… I think it takes up needed space and any way if art is worth a thousand words then yours is worth a million sentences. Any way dialogue could add a little spice to it, though you would have to edit some of the pictures to match the dialogue. Great job anyway.
The Person / February 21st, 2007, 11:08 pm / #
Best work so far!!!! My 2 favorite hotties in 1 scene.. Wow… Words cannot explain my joy!! KEEP THE JINX & RAVEN UP KARBO!!!!
#12635 Best Animation Guy / February 21st, 2007, 11:38 pm / #
Looks great. I love Raven.
TheLightThatBlinds / February 21st, 2007, 11:40 pm / #
Yeah, sound sounds nice to me!
SpLuRt!!
Clockwork Fool / February 22nd, 2007, 12:24 am / #
I too have to agree with H13. Your art has alot of expression so your not going to need, or want for that matter, too much dialogue. And a few sound effects probably wouldn’t detract from the comic.
Great job. Looking really good =)
Sherlock22 / February 22nd, 2007, 1:49 am / #
VERY GOOD Karbo!!
As H13 says, the art speaks for itself, but the sound effects could add a new element to the storyline. The sound doesn’t just have to be the girls either! It could be the crowd as well! Think about it!
H13 / February 22nd, 2007, 2:20 am / #
First page: Raven says “This isn’t the Tower.” The greeting Roxus said for the Master is cool.
Page 2: Upper left with Jinx: “So I get the goth chick? Easy.” Then when Raven and Jinx are facing each other . Raven: “As if.” Jinx: “We’ll see.”
Page 3: Middle left panel with Raven jumping: “Like I didn’t see that coming.” The middle frame with Jinx: “Fuck!” Bottom left panel with Raven kicking. Maybe some choice soudn effect. Bottom right of Raven: You were right. It was easy.”
Page 4: Upper left: “That was a letdown.” Middle frame with Raven’s thumbs up: She’s down. Bottom left for Jinx: “heh heh.” Maybe some sound effect for Jinx’s blast.
Page 5: Upper left: Jinx: Bye-bye, Ravie!” Middle right frame: Now who’s down? Jinx Bottom frame:I believe there was talk of rewards.
Page 6: “I am the victor, after all.” Maybe some choice sound effects of Raven licking Jinx.
Page 7: Upper left: Jinx “That was nice.” Middle panel: “Looks like you need some attention, too.”
Page 8: Various slurping sounds from Jinx as she licks at Raven. Maybe a grunt or two from Raven.
lock444 / February 22nd, 2007, 3:52 am / #
im loving this more and more man
i think sounds would kick ass and some light dialog would do wonders too 
mabee a few lines of jinx moaning out ravens name or vice versa 
Soleil / February 22nd, 2007, 3:58 am / #
karbo _ don´t you like to change this part of the comic and continue whit another fight like the show
Cadian501 / February 22nd, 2007, 4:21 am / #
dude amazin, cant wait to see it in color
u gotta do some avatar pics soon
The Person / February 22nd, 2007, 4:25 am / #
Keep your mouth shut Soleil. -.-’ I WANT MY JINX AND RAVEN ORGY!!
black_thorment / February 22nd, 2007, 9:09 pm / #
great, like always =)
Herald / February 22nd, 2007, 10:09 pm / #
Ok I have two ideas. First in this match I think jinxs should do something like this-http://www.karbolab.com/wp-content/uploads/2007/02/4-jinx-fuck-raven.jpg just instead of one she had twon in each hand and she used them to… like… grab Ravens hot tits and make her have an ogasm. and second in the fight with terra and blackfire(or starfire you choose your site) terra should do this-http://aerisdies.com/g/1305/44#img to black/starfire. only an idea but use it if you want.
grantastic / February 23rd, 2007, 12:16 am / #
i like it, when its colored it will be awesome, hope to see more comics, avater perhaps??
David / February 23rd, 2007, 2:13 am / #
NICE!!! ^^ second round?
NewWorld / February 23rd, 2007, 2:35 am / #
does anyone know what happened to hartists.net? the server was down and they said they were working on it and now i can’t find the page…
anonomys / February 23rd, 2007, 3:49 am / #
please hurry and finish man please, please
H13 / February 23rd, 2007, 6:54 am / #
I imagine this will probably just be a Raven and Jinx thing. Otherwise, it would just go on and on and we’d never see any other Karbo stuff to speak of.
Anonymous / February 23rd, 2007, 8:37 am / #
dude im hosny.
Roxus2 / February 23rd, 2007, 5:57 pm / #
Hey Karbo is this a new layout for the site or is there a problem with the site? if not the choice of color.
The Twin Snakes / February 27th, 2007, 7:04 pm / #
Do you think you can make a sssecondary sssstory following the raven vssss. jinkssss where sssstarfire beatsss terra or the revenge of raven againssst jinkssss.
Toshi the Wolf / February 28th, 2007, 1:26 pm / #
text and bubbles would be nice. KEEEP UP THE GREAT WORK KARBO
dazed / March 3rd, 2007, 7:28 pm / #
how about “Now… do as I say”
u should make a gif of this
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